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« on: November 15, 2012, 12:20:00 pm »
Name;; Brightclaw
Age;; 14 moons
Gender;; Male
Orientation;; straight
Alliance;; ThunderClan
Appearance {at least four sentences};; Brightclaw has a long, soft, golden pelt that shines in the sunlight. He has very few scars from past battles of his, except the huge battle scar across his eye. It's healed a small bit, getting smaller every season. His tail is long and golden with a white tip at the end. His ears are an average size of any cats ears as a young adult. His ears have small cuts on the tip though. His claws are long and pearl like, sharp enough to easily peirce another cats skin. Brightclaw's eyes are dark green with lighter, brighter flecks of green.
Personality {at least four sentences};; Brightclaw is really quiet and shy around strangers, this can be easily noticed because he stammers and talks quiet when someone he doesn't know talks to him. He is the total opposite around friends, being known to be pretty outgoing once you get to know him. Brightclaw is very inteligent and can easily solve problems, no matter how difficult the task. He can mostly be calm in almost every situation, except if he's grumpy and you get him angry- which almost never happens. When Brightclaw is angry though, he continues to be in a bad mood for the rest of the day.
History {at least six sentences};; Brightclaw was born in ThunderClan and was nursed by his mother, Dawntail, until the age of three moons because she was killed by a fox. He was very disciplined by his father when he was an apprentice because of his fathers anger and only thinks of Brightclaw as a reminder of his mother. He found a rouge named Hawk, who turned out to be his best friend after he joined ThunderClan and became a warrior even though they are complete opposites. He never had any love interests throughout his life, especially since other Clanmates would make fun of him when he was an apprentice. His only war he went into was a battle with WindClan when he just turned into a warrior. He has turned into the best hunter in ThunderClan due to practice of hunting for himself, during his fathers tests, and usually he hunts for his Clan. Brightclaw has grew up to be an experienced warrior and hasn't trained an apprentice. Now that he has gotten older he found out that he has had small crushes within the last moon.
Role-play sample {required for your first advanced biography};; Brightclaw ran towards the Ancient Oak, where he could smell a fox scent, getting stronger and stronger as he got closer. "I might want to see how many foxes are in there just to make sure it isn't a huge a problem." Brightclaw thought to himself, hoping that a fox or two wouldn't be that much of a threat. He slowed his pace so he could take a quick glance into the burrow. "Only one fox... Thank StarClan!" Brightclaw whispered and let out a sigh of relief. He quietly backed away from the fox burrow. "I should warn my Clan." Brightclaw said as he sprinted towards ThunderClan camp to warn his leader. As the camp entrance came into view, Brightclaw decided to walk so no one would know that there was a fox out in the forest. Knowing from past experiences, it wasn't a good idea to let the whole Clan know what was going on. Panicking cats was something that the Clan didn't need right now, especially since there was so much tension in the Clans. Right as he got into camp he tried to act casual as he headed straight to his leader's den, knowing that he will know what to do.
Comments;; Thanks for reading!